[wxxxx]

Paty@123 Wrote:

The story is running very slow, required to run bit faster pace with confrontation of son to the mother for her actions, and Sunni has to start an affair in the office

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wxxxx wrote:

If Sunny becomes deeply involved in a romantic relationship with a female colleague from his office, he will lose focus on the sexual activities taking place between his mother, Mrs. Anjali Sharma, and their landlord, Mr. Azad. Mrs. Anjali Sharma is 47 years old, and Sunny is 21. For the sake of the narrative, it is better if Sunny does not get involved with anyone else, as he is the story's protagonist. Readers want to hear about the sexual chemistry between his mother, Mrs. Anjali Sharma, and the landlord, Mr. Azad, through Sunny’s perspective—specifically, how he observes their intimate encounters from behind a door or through a crack, becoming intensely aroused to the point of ejaculation and reaching a state of extreme pleasure.

The story’s appeal will be enhanced—and it will be better received by readers—if it remains confined to these three characters: Sunny, his mother Mrs. Anjali Sharma, and the landlord, Mr. Azad. Introducing additional characters would only detract from the story's quality.