9 hours ago
The story plot was good and going on track. Trust me goon narration was too good, it made everyone feel the scenerio, but now you have removed it. I loved your story from the beginning but now i have no interest to read it further. If you have a plan go on with it, why to remove because of some people's opinion. I think this will be my last visit to your story and my last reply.


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