Adultery My Friend Wants My Mother

[Priya.]

Thanks for the story, though well written. It is highly disappointing for various reasons listed below. Time and again authors here fail again and again in establishing proper ending with meaningful conclusions. 

Correctly said again. This is an open ending. There is no finality in the closure. Specially keeping those pictures in that secret mobile without deleting them is like keeping a live bomb in the house. It is going to be discovered by someone or the other inevitably and when it happens Madhu should be prepared to be blown into shreds by the intensity of the explosion. 

And yes I had already mentioned earlier in a post that sub humans like Madhu and lowlife thugs and sons of bitches like Gautham do not get any retribution over here but are rather glorified as some great souls. That is why in an attempt of whitewashing his charecter bullshit dialogues like "He is not bad, he is just a young boy" had been inserted. 

If I had my way I would have ended the story with the scene where Rajesh, Vinay, Ananya, Padma & Lakshmi would be seeing playing sepaktakraw with the severed heads of Madhu & Gautham.