4 hours ago
Agree that there are a few lapses. But the author is doing pretty well. There are some truly exciting elements in the story. And the timely updates without keeping us waiting for too long is truly appreciable……The author is correcting his mistakes when pointed appropriately. He is asking feedback after every update and is also considering the opinion of the audience in directing the story. So let’s not discourage him. May be some of us can help him to make it the best through suggestions. And Girrish you are doing well. Keep going!!


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