[doodhwale_bhaiya]

Hi,
I am someone who is new to the story compared to many of the fellow readers. But I love this story!

You mentioned that the story can go from one of two directions from here. Not sure if there are two options. Please let me know if I understood that correctly, so can help you better.

Coming to the latest update - the scenes surrounding Bhola and Simran are amazingly written. I loved the part where Bhola does things with Simran behind Ravi’s back the most! Even the dynamic of Bhola stamping some sort of authority on Simran is nice! The stuff with lesbian couple preeti and her wish for pregnancy - I’m all for it.

The jeevdhatu saga - that kind of brings it more towards fantasy. It’s a good way to say that Bhola has to fuck these women to treat them, but it feels unrealistic. Compared to preeti or simran’s situation this part of the story line is hatke. NOT that It’s BAD. Just different.

Like I said - if you can tell us what the two directions you’re thinking - we can assist better. I am excited that you already have 30 pages worth of stuff written up already! Looking forward to reading it irrespective of where the story goes!

The story started as a Bhola centric dramaand his cock. But i am now more interested in making Simran our drama queen. She has lots of possibilities here. So thats one thing whether to make it just Bhola centric or Simran, our cow the main character here.
Then there is the question of making it a semi cuckold story or not. Semi, as in he does allow a few things, notices a few things etc, because making it just cheating seems less voluminous. So i was thinking about something. I dont want to disclose completely here.

But i took a long time to give the latest update. I was shifting houses, changing jobs etc. And hence this one took a backseat. But behind all those things i was continuing the story bit by bit. So that would have seriously angered a few readers. I apologize for that. But its not in my hands.

Btw the jeevdhatu thing does mean some drama which i also think amalgamating reality with fiction. But its necessary for one last tine to make the pussy the main showstopper here rather than the cock. History has seen the pussy to rule the earth, rather than the dick. So i am quite made up in my mind to make Simran more important here. For that jeevdhatu needs to come forward one last time.