17-10-2026, 02:02 AM
I read your story recently and enjoyed your writing there were some ups and downs of the story like 2 whole updates explaining the blouse was diabolical
On the other hand the Tention between mother and son was very exciting
The story is being told from son's POV so not able to get to know what happened when son wasn't witnessing her mom getting fucked felt frustrating
Maybe you can give a bit more for readers even when son is not watching scenes
Recent updates are very good and making the pace correct This latest update was nessesary The Talk between mom and son did cleared up many miss understandings and acknowledged the facts how son actually felt and how mom still loves him more than anyone making him her first priority
I still don't trust Azad at all the things she mentioned azad did for Sunny like the bike diwali gift the money was only to get Anjali he doesn't really care about sunny which Sunny could have said to her as well
The hint of the upcoming office party and the HR and Sunny's mom constantly telling him to find someone says there could be a new relationship for Sunny so it will be interesting to see if Sunny focus on mom or his future as well
Thanks for the update waiting for next
On the other hand the Tention between mother and son was very exciting
The story is being told from son's POV so not able to get to know what happened when son wasn't witnessing her mom getting fucked felt frustrating
Maybe you can give a bit more for readers even when son is not watching scenes
Recent updates are very good and making the pace correct This latest update was nessesary The Talk between mom and son did cleared up many miss understandings and acknowledged the facts how son actually felt and how mom still loves him more than anyone making him her first priority
I still don't trust Azad at all the things she mentioned azad did for Sunny like the bike diwali gift the money was only to get Anjali he doesn't really care about sunny which Sunny could have said to her as well
The hint of the upcoming office party and the HR and Sunny's mom constantly telling him to find someone says there could be a new relationship for Sunny so it will be interesting to see if Sunny focus on mom or his future as well
Thanks for the update waiting for next

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