17-10-2026, 01:25 AM
(15-10-2026, 11:31 PM)doodhwale_bhaiya Wrote:![]()
Almost 30 pages of word document are still ready but the next statement make the story either this or that. Its an erotica, i have tried to keep it as close to reality as possible giving every possible chance of shag to each male or female reading my posts. But now you guys need to decide what can be done ahead. Help me out here. Also, i have 100s of images and videos for attaching here but i dont know why its not working anymore. I am unable to upload them inside the posts.
Please like and rate parts you like.
Hi,
I am someone who is new to the story compared to many of the fellow readers. But I love this story!
You mentioned that the story can go from one of two directions from here. Not sure if there are two options. Please let me know if I understood that correctly, so can help you better.
Coming to the latest update - the scenes surrounding Bhola and Simran are amazingly written. I loved the part where Bhola does things with Simran behind Ravi’s back the most! Even the dynamic of Bhola stamping some sort of authority on Simran is nice! The stuff with lesbian couple preeti and her wish for pregnancy - I’m all for it.
The jeevdhatu saga - that kind of brings it more towards fantasy. It’s a good way to say that Bhola has to fuck these women to treat them, but it feels unrealistic. Compared to preeti or simran’s situation this part of the story line is hatke. NOT that It’s BAD. Just different.
Like I said - if you can tell us what the two directions you’re thinking - we can assist better. I am excited that you already have 30 pages worth of stuff written up already! Looking forward to reading it irrespective of where the story goes!
Keep up the amazing work!
Cheers!

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