Traditional Wife Broken by Gangster's Obsession
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(12-10-2026, 10:35 PM)Pvzro Wrote: Hi to writer
Everything moving in the episodes going ahead looks very much sexier to read ,very different from the routines bored stories Few things i would liked to see in the story it is completely your imaginations

1) Let Saroja plays and important role in also understanding chitras sex appetite as well,like she notices how well vijay is on bed with chitra
2) Concentrate more on the feeding part which u had described rich stuffs to make her more sexier along with the ornaments going ahead if possible clothes also let muttu gifts some outfits like saree or anythubg according to his selection humble request try to put some armpits episodes also since will add more erotic value to the story
3) Use drinks on a lighter note since she is a housewife let her reluctantly get into drinks as compromise kind and use drugs if possible like sexual pills low doses and exclude the smoking part for her will spoil the sexy theme of the story
4 ) Make more use of her son so that she is not willingly doing anything she sacrifices for her son
5) The husband should be brought privately in some place by muttu and he should slowly tell him what he  has planned for chitra and later he convinces him to just watch the show and see muthus stamina in bed compared to him
6) Try to make her ready unwillingly in which sarojas role in making her ready will spice things going ahead 
7) Also in your mind suggest someone very sex manic and housewife interested matured man shoul take her after Muttu

These are the few thoughts from my side 
Give it a try if u feel if needed
Rest the story u have wrote till now is wonderful 
Very much different from the regular once

Breaking a unwilling wife in a compromising situation will create the story in a hotter  way going ahead 
( Armpits episodes if possible ) 

Thanks for an excellent update
Awaiting eagerly for all your regular updates 
Keep writing and for all readers Happy Reading!!!

Thanks for your feedback... I have noted many points what you have said.. But i will use drugs and drinks in the story, that too in a larger extend... There is a reason behind it which will be explained in later part of the story...
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