Traditional Wife Broken by Gangster's Obsession
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(12-10-2026, 06:55 PM)Umavictor32 Wrote: AUTHOR NOTE:::

Please read the below update and say whether i can follow the story on same pattern or should i change the gear to somewhat soft and sexual...  Reason why i thought to proceed in this genre because i have seen many stories where man uses a woman for revenge but does romance to her... Giving her pleasure... But i feel when it comes to revenge, no man uses woman to give her pleasure... So i thought tp go in a more violent mode... (Definitely not rpae)... Just read this update and tell me whether i can follow this path or you guys expect more sensual... Please read and suggest...

Yes you are correct. Bored of happy ending stuff. 
Appreciate your choice to write it differently. 
Let it be a tragic ending if the story demands so but don't compromise on your initial objective midway to give a happy ending. Most writers make this mistake. 
Chitra transformation should be full and final and willingly done with no option to reset everything.
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RE: Traditional Wife Broken by Gangster's Obsession - by RedDranzar - 12-10-2026, 09:04 PM



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