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Tyson and Cathy start from chapter 14. Did u miss that?


Thanks for showing so much interest in this story. If I respond on plot points, it will become spoiler. I don’t want to do that. But I can assure you I have the full plot in my head and hope it comes out nice.

More than fair enough and thank you very much for the quick response.

About Tyson and Dyson, I did read a few times before posting about it. The first mention ever of the terms is when she says, "Your Tyson is dead". Same with Cathy. You already had dialog of cat and chicken, so a reader can assume it is background dialog then.

If I may say so without it looking like flattery, the story is well written, so small continuity items also get noticed.

Keep doing the great work.