[sakurasan]

@sakurasan, I would love to see a flashback on how they introduce the terms Cathy and Tyson, as well as the Cathy and Tyson story. Adds some nice, sweet, sexy content.

One thing that can become concerning is that the story is managing two channels:
1. Love story with the Rohan wanting the best for Isha and all of the pleasure to her -- someone that is a wonderful person [wimp or not], and
2. Isha having the fun (without him knowing as far as she is concerned, so it is cheating from her, instead of ethical non-monogamy).

Since you haven't touched on any of her inner conflicts yet, maybe there is an opportunity here to get these reconciled between the Isha and Rohan? Isha talks about "sometimes I had dirty thoughts before you proposed", or "I had a disgusting dream where someone did... chee..." Slowly bring them together when they are super horny (that is the right time, and he can also blurt out things, and if he blurts out Kunal's name, she can say, "seriously"). There can also be some revelations where she is keeping notes for herself or sending to Kunal telling about how she needs to tell Rohan.

Once I had a smart girl tell me before any physical stuff happened, "I'd stay monogamous even if I have an impotent husband," (she had many bf's but serial monogamy). I feel that I should have said, "If I were impotent, I'd encourage my wife to take a lover," but I just stayed silent. Anyway, people can have different life styles as long as they want as long as they don't hurt anyone. In the days of Cornell frat parties, a loving couple pulling a bull into their life is a nothingburger.

Without reconciliation between Isha and Rohan, there is a danger of the story taking a quick short-cut ending. Something like Tollywood/Kollywood movies, where there is a large, almost heart-breaking drama till last ten minutes, then everyone reconciles, the groom in the wedding changes, and the entire party celebrates like it is perfectly normal :) [real life will be a postponed wedding and the parents of bride and groom finding that their stars don't match :D, or they have to relocate to another state or country]

Tyson and Cathy start from chapter 14. Did u miss that?


Thanks for showing so much interest in this story. If I respond on plot points, it will become spoiler. I don’t want to do that. But I can assure you I have the full plot in my head and hope it comes out nice.