04-10-2026, 10:49 AM
Sex portions in this story is nice but some things which i feel author cud have done better..
1. Sex portion for priya left in half way..
2. Is meera character necessary??
3. At once priya and husband says to nisha tat someone took video without their knowledge, how come nisha didnt say anything...
4. Why didnt Nisha have doubt on priya. Every woman are afraid abt their videos getting leaked in public... But y nt priya...
On the whole story is brilliant... But cud have focussed on these loop holes
1. Sex portion for priya left in half way..
2. Is meera character necessary??
3. At once priya and husband says to nisha tat someone took video without their knowledge, how come nisha didnt say anything...
4. Why didnt Nisha have doubt on priya. Every woman are afraid abt their videos getting leaked in public... But y nt priya...
On the whole story is brilliant... But cud have focussed on these loop holes
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