[meesha83]

Dave Rajan

There are many stories here with the theme of adultery. Majority of those stories portray women as sluts who crave for sex. There is one story which I iked was Nisha Ungalil Oruthy. The women were charcterised as sluts. Even the heroine. Nisha the heroine loses her marriage willingly for another guy who gave her great pleasure and was dominant in sex. But later she realises that sexual pleasure is not full life. SHe marries another guy and realises her mistakes she made in her first marriage. Though the ending was abrupt, but the author ended in good note. That story has a similar style like yours. Sex in the storylin and not storyline in sex. Hope you don't change your style to satisfy some commenters here.

Thank you