Adultery A husband's mistake - A wife's transformation

[rahulishere]

Hey Rahul

I started xossipy reading with your story husband's mistake.
It was superbly engaging. Your writing made me fall for Sukanya.
Intimate moments with sharath was so good.
Vimals crooked mind and his portion was so cinematic.

Later when after new thread was created..
I felt little less for me. Seeing Sukanya as college girl was little diminishing the plot.
But I felt you traversed through it nicely now.
With Praveen.. Sukanya might transform now.. Until now she is lovable wife of Raghav.

Good going..
Pl try to update frequently.
Sometimes longer breaks makes us less engaging towards the story.

Good Job Rahul.

Thank you so much for spending time to write a detailed feedback. I respect your opinion and agree with your points. It's always satisfying for a writer when he/she receives feedback, may it be positive or negative. I'll post an update today.