02-01-2019, 03:57 PM
Quote:Ramesh1990:
>As breville1 has rightly pointed out, the last couple of lines weren't done properly. So here is a redo:
Kajol smoothed the young woman’s hair. She knew, something, somewhere was not quite right with this girl. Stealing a look at the closed bathroom door, she asked instinctively, “Did this happen on the Singapore trip?”
Preeti’s eyes misted over immediately. She lowered her eyes and nodded in answer.
“And …. … Ramesh?” Barely, had she uttered his name when she found Preeti’s hand clamped on her mouth. There was that urgent pleading in her eyes.
Kajol’s shut her eyes, feeling the hot shame burning up her cheeks. She was not sure about the level of intimacy that Ramesh might have had with this girl. Sometimes, he used to take her name in sleep and more recently, was being evasive … Did that point to something? Maybe. Maybe not! After all, Ramesh was too decent a guy. But then again, one never knew – especially when young women were concerned …
But one thing was certain. She herself was the slut – a slut out of choice. And she had demanded answers from Preeti, to prove to her that the latter was no better than her. Maybe Ramesh had used her as had Mr. Rao and now she was doing the same. It was Preeti’s hand on her mouth that demonstrated her vulnerability and sent her a reminder that she had judged another person – without knowing her side of the story. Kajol’s closed her eyes tight. What sort of a human being was she?
There was the sound of the bathroom door opening. Mr. Rao stepped out with a broad smile. Preeti got up quickly and collected her clothes making her way to the vacated bathroom.
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