My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read)

[Tea_Kadai_Boy]

Surprised with the recent story part happenings between Landlord and Anjali at her flat with Sunny standing outside. No doubt it is exciting, kinky, exhibitionist and great part in a normal sex story. But it is jarringly out of sync with the tone and temper of the story. It became a run of mill part. Maybe to satisfy the expectations of certain readers. Sunny character, which was in emotional dilemma in every aspect, became a normal character of a normal sex story. I expected sunny to tell the readers how Landlord fucks and deals his mother in some extra ordinary erotic way, but not in this degenerative way. Showing sunny explicitly before them as motherly cuckold didn't jell. Fucking her with whole flat building knowing didn't go with the suggestive narrative of the story. But I am certain the author will bring out some extremely great stuff, out of this normal part.