24-09-2026, 07:29 PM
Overcrowding a story with too many characters detracts from its appeal and discourages readers; a cast of four or five—such as a father, mother, son, and daughter—offers a more enjoyable reading experience. The narrative should feature a central character involved in an illicit relationship with either the mother or the daughter, while the son secretly observes everything and narrates the events to the reader. I respectfully request the esteemed author, chrisgale159, to give this suggestion serious consideration.