Adultery My Friend Wants My Mother

[CoreMadness]

This is going great . Excellent narration . I just finished the last chapter that ended with a good twist . Hahaha , Good for me .

Vinay is such a pathetic character , dumbwit and weak . Throughout the last two chapters i was furious whenever i was reading his part but In the end , The choice that he has to make is such a great opportunity for his character Arc. For Once I wanna a see Rebel character or once where a character take stand and overcome his own inner conflicts and insecurity of his own .

At First I thought , This is a cuckson stoy , Three character only , story revolving around them , and it was nice premise but but but The Father character changes the whole scene . Here we have a son who still cares about His family and HIS FATHER, and I refuse to believe that VINAY is gonna fold under the manipulation or the blackmail  . I am not saying He should tell everything to his father but He should play the game , Show his cards , though He got cornered here , but A cornered animal is almost as dangerous as a wounded one

Vinay's character is really good , A gullible boy , easy to manipulate , exploring fantasy and confusing taboo's feeling . His character has potential to show growth as compare to Gautham characters Too strong and too confident . He did him dirty though He never hide it , but again to trap him like that and threating him , I hope Vinay atleast has bit of ego still inside him .

Oh , I dont know whenn you gonna post next chapter , untill then we can only wonder , How story will progress ?

I hope that it's gonna be like  Son vs Mother & Lover . lol . I dont think I have read any story which contains the SON VS MOTHER plot . It is gonna be interesting .

Even if it is simple cuckson story , It is still good . So it is win win in the end .

Once Again , Nice Story 

(Comments are for fun , Not criticism of the story or writer )

If you believe that this is not a cuckson story then you are delusional. Author only writes cuckson stories, go and read rest...at the end every one adjusts according to the affair....worst kind of stories(my personal opinion nothing against author) though good writing and perfect circumstances and very well written by author(hence reading as much as I can take it) and there is a fan base for cuckson also here...stories like these need to be tagged under Incest. 

There is no fight incoming as you predicted, Vinay will get excited, he will even eventually watch secretly shagging on his own mother just like his other story where son is weak and allowing neighbor in his village...prepare yourself for cuckson story. 

No redemption arcs here....