Adultery My Friend Wants My Mother

[DeanWinchester00007]

This is going great . Excellent narration . I just finished the last chapter that ended with a good twist . Hahaha , Good for me .

Vinay is such a pathetic character , dumbwit and weak . Throughout the last two chapters i was furious whenever i was reading his part but In the end , The choice that he has to make is such a great opportunity for his character Arc. For Once I wanna a see Rebel character or once where a character take stand and overcome his own inner conflicts and insecurity of his own .

At First I thought , This is a cuckson stoy , Three character only , story revolving around them , and it was nice premise but but but The Father character changes the whole scene . Here we have a son who still cares about His family and HIS FATHER, and I refuse to believe that VINAY is gonna fold under the manipulation or the blackmail  . I am not saying He should tell everything to his father but He should play the game , Show his cards , though He got cornered here , but A cornered animal is almost as dangerous as a wounded one

Vinay's character is really good , A gullible boy , easy to manipulate , exploring fantasy and confusing taboo's feeling . His character has potential to show growth as compare to Gautham characters Too strong and too confident . He did him dirty though He never hide it , but again to trap him like that and threating him , I hope Vinay atleast has bit of ego still inside him .

Oh , I dont know whenn you gonna post next chapter , untill then we can only wonder , How story will progress ?

I hope that it's gonna be like  Son vs Mother & Lover . lol . I dont think I have read any story which contains the SON VS MOTHER plot . It is gonna be interesting .

Even if it is simple cuckson story , It is still good . So it is win win in the end .

Once Again , Nice Story 

(Comments are for fun , Not criticism of the story or writer )