Adultery Maa Bani Classmate: Part II — Shadows of Desire

[Tiger687]

Thanks for this bro, for quite some time i am also feeling that someting is going off or missing.

Buddy I can understand..I am too a writer and talking with lots of writer on this site and other sites too. If you want to write a blockbuster story.I could suggest you and first of all you have to understand what did reader's want from your story. I know their many reader's who try to suggest you for their interest but as writer I knows very after that you will write some update after that their will be nothing to write. If you want than I will help you and your story surely will be come back track and it will be blockbuster once more. Because I know very you are the fantastic writer but your story telling and story planning is very weak..it's fact don't mind..If you want than tell I can help you in private..aur you don't want simply tell me I don't have any problem you can go on by you...but surely tell that still this story can be a blockbuster story...you will get atleast more than 30+ likes every update.. once story will come on track it will be increase regularly.