21-09-2026, 05:33 AM
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(20-09-2026, 12:53 PM)Luna_Fantasies_ Wrote: Bhai thank you for comment, so mein batana chata hu 2 types ki writings hai conversation writing and situation based writing. jab dono ko blend karte hai tho story kheechti hai lambi, logo bade fast paced hote hai. Conversation se zyaada situation pe focus karte hai.Thank you aapne meri baat par dhyan diya
Aur hamere jo main characters hai vo millennials hai. Aur millennials kafi kam baat cheet karte hai bilkul na ke barabar Sex ke time. ham readers zen-z hai tho ham sab intrested hai sexy baate karne ko par unn ka vesa nahi hai character based writing mein ye iinclude karna ho tho first se karna hoga. par future mein ek aur story ready hai uss mein karenge kuch.
Shikha gharelu type ki hai, upar se vo kisi gaav main padhi likhi hai, unn ke yaha pe yesi koi gaandi cheeze hote vo kabhi nahi dekhi bas sher aake ye sab mein phass chuki hai. jab character aage badega shyad vo khul kar ajay ke saat baate karegi.
Maine shikha ko open karne ke liye nhi bola hai aur na hi uske sath bahut hi kinki baatcheet ki demand ki hai but ye adult movie nhi hai balki story hai jise ham padh kar hi situation ko feel kar sakte hai
Chahe to sex scene ko 4 line me bhi likh kar khatm kiya ja sakta hai lekin isse story ki situation me intance bonding aur chemistry explain nhi ho payegi
I think aap meri baat complement ki tarah lenge aapki story plot buliding bahut achi bas sex scene ko thoda intense banaye
Jaise shikha kitni bhi sharmili ho bhale hi wo sex ke time muh se reply n kare lekin uski body kuch react kare jaise sharma kar najar hatana ya churana ya muskurate hue chest me muh chupa lena ya wo bole pls aisa mat bolo mujhe sharm aa rahi hai
Aur bhai mard jaat chahe kisi bhi generation ka ho wo hamesha open hi hota hai sex me mard ko besharmi karne do aur aurat ko sharmane do
Aur mai khud nhi chahta shikha koi dirty word bole
Use sharmili hi rakhna nhi mja kharab ho jayega
Pls positively lena apki story achi lagi tabhi response kar raha hun
Pls keep update ?thank you ?


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