20-09-2026, 09:01 PM
(20-09-2026, 05:52 PM)Joker44 Wrote: Bas yahi problem hai tum logon ke saath—koi story ko dhang se padhta hi nahi. Rahul obviously hero hai, purani story mein bhi wahi tha. But agar heroine poori story mein ek hi bande ke saath hi involved rahegi, toh story mein naya kya milega? Kitne sex scenes ke baad story boring ho jayegi, ye bhi toh samajhna padega.
Story mein ek bigger picture hona zaroori hai, aur wahi main build kar raha hoon. Next part mein suspense hai ki Rahul kaise dheere-dheere sab kuch apne control mein lega aur aage kya hoga. Lekin sab log bas ek hi cheez par atke hue hain, instead of overall storyline aur aage ke plot ko dekhne ke.
Mujhe samajh me nahi aa raha hai tum sare reader's iss writer ko suggestion Kyu de rahe ho. Jabki tum sabko malum hai Writer already Abhay ko hi favour karta hai. Aur yeh baat usne starting me clear kar di hai.Hala ki Mai samajh sakta hoon Rahul ko chahane wale thodi si asha lagaye story par aate hai aur nirash ho kar wapis jaate hai. Kyunki Trupti apne bete se bhi jyada kisi aur ko chahti hai. Sorry but this is fact.
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