Adultery Maa Bani Classmate: Part II — Shadows of Desire

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Bas yahi problem hai tum logon ke saath—koi story ko dhang se padhta hi nahi. Rahul obviously hero hai, purani story mein bhi wahi tha. But agar heroine poori story mein ek hi bande ke saath hi involved rahegi, toh story mein naya kya milega? Kitne sex scenes ke baad story boring ho jayegi, ye bhi toh samajhna padega.

Story mein ek bigger picture hona zaroori hai, aur wahi main build kar raha hoon. Next part mein suspense hai ki Rahul kaise dheere-dheere sab kuch apne control mein lega aur aage kya hoga. Lekin sab log bas ek hi cheez par atke hue hain, instead of overall storyline aur aage ke plot ko dekhne ke.

Ye story kafi ache se likhi gayi hai kyunki bahut saara suspense aur twist hai. Ek writer hone ke naate, aapko jo sahi lage aap likho. 

Waise main bhi apni mann ki baat batana chahunga. Aap jo soch rahe ki multiple characters se sex hona chahiye wo bilkul sahi hai. Tab hi life aur story mein maza hai.

Rahul bhi lag raha hai main hero hai, par ek baat jo khalti hai wo ye ki Rahul hi tha jisko Arpita ka pyaar milna chahiye tha saath mein lust bhi as a main hero. Abhay thik hai wo bhi main rahe to bhi acha hai. Main ye sab isliye bol raha hun kyunki mujhe lagta hai ki Rahul hi sabse zyada pyaar karta tha Arpita ko (Maa aur Pyaar dono roop mein). Abhay to bas normal college ke ladko jaisa hi behave kar raha tha, bas utna harami nahi tha. Lekin usko bhi sex karna tha maza lena tha shuruat mein. Phir dheere dheere Pyaar hua. Rahul ki kuch galtiyon ke chalte Arpita usse duur ho gayi mann/dil se, jo nahi hona chahiye tha.

Waise sex to aur logo ke saath bhi hona chahiye. Mujhe to personally threesome, foursome, etc ye bhi pasand hai. Sex kafi logo se karne ke baad bhi ek time par saath mein ya phir alag alag, kabhi kabhi koi ek hi main pyaar hota hai. Dusro se bhi pyaar ho sakta hai par kam.

Ye to bas mere mann ki baat hai, aapko jo thik lage, aapne jaise socha waisa hi likhe.

Thanks ye story ke liye.