20-09-2026, 05:52 PM
(20-09-2026, 04:36 PM)BigBlackBull Wrote: Tumhe laga tha tumhara hero Abhay banega aur reader's story padhane ayenge galti se aa bhi gaye to story ke start ka instruction padh kar hi bhag jayenge. Yeh story padhane maximum log sirf Rahul ke liye aa rahe the. Yeh ek badi series ban sakti thi. Rahul aur Trupti ko center me rakh kar aur reader's ka bhi intrest bana rahta. Lekin tumhe story adultery aur cuckold banani thi. Hero Abhay ko banana tha bass kuch reader's ke khatir. Ab response ke bare mein Kyu soch rahe ho phir. Rahul ke favour wala koi nahi hai yaha padhane. Mai bhi galti se aaya kuch to hoga soch kar. Sorry ha.
Bas yahi problem hai tum logon ke saath—koi story ko dhang se padhta hi nahi. Rahul obviously hero hai, purani story mein bhi wahi tha. But agar heroine poori story mein ek hi bande ke saath hi involved rahegi, toh story mein naya kya milega? Kitne sex scenes ke baad story boring ho jayegi, ye bhi toh samajhna padega.
Story mein ek bigger picture hona zaroori hai, aur wahi main build kar raha hoon. Next part mein suspense hai ki Rahul kaise dheere-dheere sab kuch apne control mein lega aur aage kya hoga. Lekin sab log bas ek hi cheez par atke hue hain, instead of overall storyline aur aage ke plot ko dekhne ke.
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