My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read)

[Authorsunny]

Bro... already time is 9 pm, they are still at shop and not had dinner.
But Anjali is in hurry ...why?...what happened to their evening 6 pm plan.

 I wish Anjali's complete wardrobe will get replaced with new seducing branded clothes (sleeveless deep cut blouses, transparent sarees,satin nighty etc...,.(I don't know about her dressing style infront of people like ammai,and neighbours)

Since she mentioned about gym, why don't Anjali and sunny together do it at home.yoga atleast.
Azad is dominant person,he already knows Anjali is submissive,he knows Sunny's acceptance,and sunny won't object anything.and he even know sometimes Anjali won't wear anything under nighty at home,infront of sunny.
So,what is azad doing in his relationship. Just plain sex with Anjali when ever he is in mood. 
Will he advance it to the other level like... staying night in their flat even when sunny is there.
Will he dominate sunny like a stepdad.
As of now sunny is trying to talk more openly with his mom.
And Anjali also...doing same.

Agreed, brother. Azad has a huge role in this story — that part isn’t changing.


Because it’s written from Sunny’s point of view, you won’t always get detailed scenes centered on Azad. A lot of what he does will land through Sunny’s eyes, his reactions, and the space Azad starts taking up around him.


This is a slow-burn, long-term story. Nothing here happens overnight. Azad can’t just start dominating Sunny by tomorrow morning. That shift needs a solid buildup, real pressure, and reasons that feel earned.


I want readers to feel like they’re living inside it — and to feel the heat by staying with Sunny.


Hope the pace is sitting right with you so far.