My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read)

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I don't know what to say. It's one of the ultimate. The latest parts went beyond something I never imagined. Anjali had a different dimension, when she spoke of his adulthood and the reason sunny should have a girlfriend. She is matured enough to know a mother also attracts a adult son in a cramped room and close living. The heat sunny caught is natural. The scenes of nude Anjali is erotically great.  Losing herself completely to Landlord is another dimension of her. According to her he is a complicated and perfect person and overbearing.
The writing- short and simple sentences, not telling but showing which left everything to imagination along with the environment, is addictively excellent. Though it looks like slow burner, in reality it a charging Vande Bharat train. All three characters are pitiable and understandable.
As to your previous reply to my comment, my reply is not a criticism, because there is no wrong in that part, and which was immensely great in its own way. It's an imaginary riot.  One of the readers @spica308 had correctly interpreted it. It's just only my suggestion and expectation, that you could well ignore it and need not explained it.

Thank you, Tea_Kadai_Boy. I really value this.

My aim is a long story — a novel, not a rush of scenes. Things should not jump out of nowhere. Characters should not flip overnight. The house, the money, the affair, the heat — all of it has to move at a pace that feels real enough to believe.

That is the only test I keep for myself. If a reader can stay with it and still remember the people later, the work is doing its job.

Your earlier note was never criticism for me. It was a suggestion. I can take it or leave it. 

Thank you for reading it this closely.