12-09-2026, 12:01 PM
I really like the way how this story is progressing. Author has put his best to hook with this story. Thank you so much. This story is going to be one of the best stories I read in this forum. Please stick to your way of writing style. Consider others' suggestions if they are helpful your plot. But don't give up ideas for those ideas which may alter your narration.


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