వదినతో అంత వీజీ (ఈజీ) కాదు

[Kamalaaju]

Anteee….
Bane undhii…..
Kani inkaa bagundachuu…

Positives:
1. Vadhina maridhi mata vini sankalu chupinchadam
2. Vadhina andhalu jeans and top lo describe cheyadam
3. Ni puku midha puttumacha undha ani adagadam

Negatives:
1. Last update lo kathi lanti cliffhanger petti, mammalni anthaa 1 week wait cheyinchi, akkada nundi start cheyakapovadam.
3. Update 2000 words ledhu. Okavela unna gani enudko chalaa takkuvaga unnatu anipistundi.
4. Mammalni comment cheyamantunaru gani miru reply ivvatledhu.

Suggestion:
Sorry teacher story laga emotions assala rayaku bro. Adhi starting lo kutha pagal undedi, kani adhi epudu aithe emotion side ellindho akkada nundi chiraku dengindi, malli last ki ochesariki chala baguntadi. honest ga cheppali ante ,Aa beeruvalo jarigina gudhulata and theatre scenes ni ippatiki okkosari chadivi karchukuntanu.
Nuv edo daily updates isthu emotion laagithe ok gani. Weekly once adhi kuda 2000 words update lo emotions ante, Mem karchadaniki 2-3 nelalu padtadi emo.
Niku interest lekapothe 4-5 updates lo story chuttey gaani inka sagadeeyaku bro.