My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read)

[Authorsunny]

Hi buddy,

Yeah, some comments have definitely been deleted. Not sure of the exact reason. Maybe the ones that used Azad’s earlier name got pulled because of forum restrictions.

About that scene feeling out of place — Sunny has already accepted the relationship to a large extent. He was sent out on celebration night, and the next night he was sent home while Ma came back later. There are already enough signs for him to understand what’s happening behind his back.

In the scene you mentioned, Ma had fallen asleep after a heavy session in the afternoon. She was already exhausted from the previous night and hadn’t slept properly. After sex with Azad, it’s natural she drifted off. On top of that, her phone battery has been acting up — she may have set an alarm that never ringed.

It isn’t fully in “motherly cuckold” territory yet. It’s more about the son discovering the affair, seeing how deeply she’s into it, and watching that transformation.

That said, I take the criticism the same way I take the praise. It keeps me mindful of what readers expect while I write the next chapters.