My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read)

[Tea_Kadai_Boy]

I couldn't find my last comments. Don't know the reasons.
That part where Sunny comes home in the evening, knowing that Azad had had his afternoon with his mother, and had to wait long time for the door to be open and going inside the house, and seeing the condition of his mother, things of the rooms and its environment, is completely jarring and out of the sync with the flow and writing of the story.
That part was explicit and out of turn. The logical course of your style of writing would have been, the mother Anjali would be extra cautious and would have cleaned herself and the room. Despite the same Sunny would have seen the escaped things from cleaning. It is somewhat out of sync that Anjali had slept till he comes and cleaned hurriedly and sunny seeing things explicitly.
But that part showed hints of character of motherly cuckold where son sees widow mother fucked by someone else.
That part apart subsequent parts are on fire.