10-09-2026, 07:44 PM
(10-09-2026, 07:19 PM)V1star Wrote: I'm very happy with the way story is progressing.
Just like a movie where a fight after fight happens without any emotional connect will become disaster.
There has to be a emotional connect & drama should work out well....
Then only the fight scene will make us whistle.
Similarly writer bro...is not writing a sex scene after sex scene, continues bang bang.and he is not letting Anjali fucked by sunny,desai, or that chicken delivery boy.
With limited characters, with a lot of drama...
Sweet box scene,monthly money/rent scene,this chicken delivery scene with Anjali
Ammi's remarks,Sunitha's remarks and her husband coverup.
& Furthermore Sunny's feelings regarding everything.
Is going very well for me.
But stil....sunny taking shit from everyone is a bit concern for me.


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