My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read)
Keep it up bro. the build up is perfect.
i feel like am burning slowly with the main charactors in their world.
some suggestions from me if you allow me.
a. There is an unexpected knock at the door at 1 am early in.the morning. its Azad there. Anjali has been avoiding his multiple request to get her intimate in her small room.Anjali ask her son to go.out of the house for 10 mins again. and you know by now ten mins means 2 hrs. he is out alone in.the pitch dark waiting on.the stairs. until a new charactor drop in.the story. its a middle age mature lady ..new tenant ...the son timidly starts a conversation on.the stairs ..
b. The lady has two daughters..they are twins. same age working in Govt sector.
c. she ior aazad are taking the son for granted now ...
on start drifting unconciously away from Anjali... ..while she is taking her son for granted now...pushes him away any.time any day .

i feel that the son suffering inwardly and he needs someone to douse the fire inside him.since his mother is now going thru a phase of uncontrollable passions ignited by Azad.
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RE: My mother and the landlord - by prabudmt - 12-08-2026, 12:24 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 01:53 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 01:57 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 02:03 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 02:56 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 03:10 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Aragon - 12-08-2026, 04:05 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by prabudmt - 12-08-2026, 04:16 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 05:20 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 05:27 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read) - by Max Duncun - 05-09-2026, 01:32 PM



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