My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read)
(09-09-2026, 04:57 PM)spica308 Wrote: The USP of this story is that the narration suggests with out being explicit and vulgar. Writer has managed to keep the flow taut with under current of erotica in the story.
So far the story has gone extremely well and managed to engage interest of readers.
As the story does not include explicit narration, some conjectures by readers are inevitable. To me the last chapter, when Sunny comes back from Office suggests following (These are conclusions based on information provided in Chapter 25 – Monday (Continued) 1 December 2025 – Monday)

1. "The heavy main door was pulled back. The net door inside it was shut"
To me it suggests, Azad has come down entered his house recently. May be his departure from the flat was delayed due to what ever reason.
2. "Then I heard movement. Sudden. Not the slow movement of a person who has been sitting."
Probably, Anjali fell asleep as soon as Azad left. She did not put any clothes on or tidied up the room. This explains hastily put on nighty, partially arranged bed, Purple sari and under garments not properly stored, evidence of intimacy (condoms) still present in the bin etc. condom wrapper not disposed off and haste with which Azad left flat, Pillows lying every where, pillow cover inside out etc. All this indicates vigorous sexual encounter.
3. "She was sweating. Not kitchen sweat."
Whatever was happening, just got over recently. No time for sweat to dry.
4. "She went slowly. Both feet stepping at a larger distance than usual, as if the inner part of her thighs had been used and the body had not forgotten"
Probably, Azad had anal sex with her. She has crossed another line on his insistence. Clearly the world did not end. This explains closed windows and grill, perhaps to keep noise down. That could explain strange walk. She has been intimate with Azad before, it did not change her walk apparently. It is possible Azad came fully charged (Viagra ??? any one) and fucked her very hard.
5. Purple Sari, Panty and Bra etc
Sunny notes in his diary that he has not seen the clothes before. When morning food was delivered to Azad falt, may be same was given to her at that time. Or he brought them when he came around 02:00 PM. He had no way to buy these yesterday, as late sunday evening she said yes to rendezvous. No petticoat noted by Sunny ??. Possibly over looked. Painted nails indicate she prepared herself for him.
6. "Her hair was open and flattened on one side, as if a pillow or a hand had been there too long".
Not clear, but may be she had sex in spooning position. Hair flattened on one side -- may be during the act, Azad holds her hair (Hotel Video). Surprisingly, Sunny dies not report any love bites on her sensitive skin.
7. Sweet Box - She says she did not open it properly. The tape is disturbed at end. May somebody opened it and closed it again. Azad brings sweets when she comes to her flat to claim her favours on special occasions (He brought dates on Laxmi Pujan Night).

Reason for "The floor near the bed looked wiped in one patch and not in another. A pillow cover was inside out on the chair under the purple saree" is not clear. Also, money given by Ammi to Sunny may indicate acknowledgement and gratitude for proving food with out being asked. Maid will come back on Tusesday, so that is the last of food offered.

Clearly Azad came fully charged, prepared and in a mood to take "No'. Anjali it seems reciprocated his fervour in full measure

These are conjectures drawn from the information provided in the story on Page 22 and 23. Some or all of them may be wrong. Only writer can confirm or debunk the conclusions (may be on incomplete / misunderstood information.

Because of the length of updates, it is not very easy to draw conclusions or appreciate the flow. I am anot asking author for bigger updaes (though that will be welcome). He should continue at at his face and post update at his convenience. We all have life out side Xossipy, this fact is appreciated.
Thanks to Author Sunny for wonderfull and interestin story.

Very well analysis brother. Excellent reading between the lines.
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RE: My mother and the landlord - by prabudmt - 12-08-2026, 12:24 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 01:53 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 01:57 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 02:03 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 02:56 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 03:10 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Aragon - 12-08-2026, 04:05 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by prabudmt - 12-08-2026, 04:16 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 05:20 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 05:27 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read) - by Authorsunny - 09-09-2026, 05:45 PM



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