My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read)
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(15-08-2026, 01:18 AM)RCF Wrote: Is Sunny a mature adult or a stupid ass kid who doesn't know how to respect his mother's personal life and its privacy? When two adults who lost their respective spouses are trying to build a life together, what is his bloody problem lol

Trying to sniff everything like a street dog and lifting his leg to make a scene. This whole investigative attitude of Sunny is getting tiring now, when will he grow up!

~RCF

Hi RCF,

Thank you for the thoughtful comment. I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts.

This story is written entirely from Sunny’s point of view in a diary-style format. My goal is to keep it as close to real life as possible, without clear heroes or villains. It’s more of a life journey than a traditional story.

At this stage, Sunny isn’t being investigative. He’s simply observing everything around him, processing it in his own way, and still not ready to fully accept what’s happening. That tension is intentional.

Thanks again for the feedback. Looking forward to hearing more of your thoughts as the story continues.
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RE: My mother and the landlord - by prabudmt - 12-08-2026, 12:24 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 01:53 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 01:57 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 02:03 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 02:56 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 03:10 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Aragon - 12-08-2026, 04:05 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by prabudmt - 12-08-2026, 04:16 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 05:20 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord - by Authorsunny - 12-08-2026, 05:27 PM
RE: My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read) - by Authorsunny - 15-08-2026, 02:00 PM



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