24-08-2026, 05:12 PM
(This post was last modified: 24-08-2026, 05:19 PM by bineeshm. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.
Edit Reason: Some update on the writing style
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Great update! Please let Bharath get some fun for once instead of always leaving him out in the cold. Jeevi brought all her current troubles on herself, so nobody should feel bad for her. She walked away from Bharath during his lowest point, treated him terribly, hid his child from him, and foolishly put all her faith in Aravindh instead. She doesn't deserve to come back into Bharath's life. Meanwhile, Manju’s character is sadly turning into a total sex maniac.
Madhi and Kavi are good-hearted young people who need to stay away from selfish older folks like Jeevi, Aravindh, and Manju. They deserve a fresh start to live their own lives freely.
As for the writing, the story currently feels more like a summarized recap than the smooth, engaging narrative it usually is. Please remember that so many readers love your talent and eagerly wait for every single chapter. Focus on your loyal fanbase rather than counting quick comments!
Madhi and Kavi are good-hearted young people who need to stay away from selfish older folks like Jeevi, Aravindh, and Manju. They deserve a fresh start to live their own lives freely.
As for the writing, the story currently feels more like a summarized recap than the smooth, engaging narrative it usually is. Please remember that so many readers love your talent and eagerly wait for every single chapter. Focus on your loyal fanbase rather than counting quick comments!
Bineesh!


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