16-08-2026, 10:04 AM
Very enticing novel, yet very underrated.
Author has immense command over the scene narration and character dev.
But there are at times gaps in continuity and world building. Otherwise this is probably a readymade script for a new-age desi Netflix series.
I also suggest a tweak in title.... change to : Monica - Noida Wife's descent into Quicksand of Lust
Awaiting update!
Author has immense command over the scene narration and character dev.
But there are at times gaps in continuity and world building. Otherwise this is probably a readymade script for a new-age desi Netflix series.
I also suggest a tweak in title.... change to : Monica - Noida Wife's descent into Quicksand of Lust
Awaiting update!


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