14-08-2026, 08:25 PM
28 Jaana tune nahi jaana
UPDATE 28
Moti lal....nahi nahi wo aisa nahi karygi, khbhi kisi ke aage nahi jhukti wo.
Main .... Sale wo kaun si desh ki maharani hai. Jo jhukti nahi.
Mera land.....ha ha, wo tere liye nahi jhuki, per mere liye jhuki thi. Or tu kahta h ki wo kisi ke liye nahi jhukti. Jhooth saala................
Ab aage:-
Hum dono construction site se nikle, raaste main daru ki bottle li, dimagh jo khrab tha mera.
Mera land.... Sale mere dimag se sochta na to hum dono apna apna doodh pee rahe hote. Per tujhe to apne dost ki free ki daaru hi pini hai. Mujhe bhi pila de wo moot, choot ka moot peene ki umar main apne ander ka hi moot nikalne ke layak ka hi rah gaya hu.
Saala land bhi kya kya soch leta h koi sharm nahi, sharm hoti to land naam hi kyu padta iska.
Moti lal....bhai biwi maarygi, agar pee ke gaya to aaj.
Main....saale, tere Ghar kon kah raha h, mere kamre per peeyange, phir tu wahi so jaaiyo. Mujhe apne land ki pyaas bhujwai thi, to mene soch liya aaj iski biwi ki baja kar uski narzagi dur karuga.
Moti lal ka dimagh bhi khrab tha, kaam na milne ki vajah se, aur apni biwi ki khitpit se.....thik h phir padi rahne de us saali kutiya ko akele.
Hum dono mere kamre ki taraf chal padye, raaste main Savita ki dukaan aayi, Jahan uski beti Kamna thi, main moti lal ko...tu chal mere kamre pe main kuch khane-peene ka le aata hu. Wo chala gaya or main Kamna ke pass.
Kamna.... security officer walo ne phir nahi pakda tujhe, kisi se doodh lete huye.
Main is roj roj ke mazak se tang aa gaya tha, or gusse main... . Tere se mangta hu tu deti nahi bina peso ke, kisi din zabdasti le lung, phir chikhti rahio.
Kamna gusse main....itni himmat h teri gaand main.
Mera land... Teri gaand se isko kya matlab, Mujhe bahar nikal, is chinnal ko Main dekhta hu.
Jab usko sharm nahi thi aise shbdo se to mujhe kya.
Main......gaand main nahi mere lode main bhut himmat h. Aur agar ye jaag gaya na, to tere doodh ko to main baad main piyunga phale ye teri neeche ka sara doodh pee lega .
Kamna apne munh per haath rakhte huye....... Haaye dahyiaa, kesi ghatiya baat Karta hai re tu.
Phali baar mene dekha uska chehra shram se jhuk gaya h.
Main .....uski chochiyo ko goorte hue, ab chakhne degi, ya main jaayu.
Kamna Ne jab meri taraf dekha, to paya ki main uske doodh ko ghoor raha hu aur chkhne ke liye bol raha hu, to wo samjhi ke main uske doodh ko chakhne ki baat kar raha hu........dekho ye tum sahi nahi kar rahe, aise gandi baat karke.
Main 10 rs usko dete huye kaha....mene ab kon si gandi baat kar di, arye khane ke liya chakhna hi to maang raha hu, aur ye lo pese.
Kamna phir shram se pani Pani hogai. Phir usne mujhe chakna(bhune hue namkeen chhole) diye. Or main leker apne kamre per aa gaya.
Hum dono ne daaru pee, moti lal to pure nashe main hi aa gaya.....saali mujhe kutta kahti h meri biwi, uski maa ko chodu, badwai mujhe nikamma kheti h. Mitthan bahi tu hi use sidha kar sakta h. Saali ko chod de tu. Nashe main kya kya bak raha tha use hi pata nahi tha. Wo zameen per hi pad gaya.
Meri bhi thodi der aankh lag gai, jab khuli to dekha gaon ke sabhi gharo ki light band ho chuki h or andhera bhi bahut ho chuka hai. Main apni khatiya se utha, bahar aaya, aur Suman ke ghar ki taraf chal pada, per yahan ek gajab baat ho gai jab main Suman ke ghar ki taraf muda, usi samya mere picche Savita meri gali main aayi, usne dekha main khain Jaa Raha hu, raat ka samay tha wo mujhe awaaz de nahi sakti thi, to wo ye dekhne ke liye ki main kaha Jaa raha hu to, wo mere picche picche ho lee.
Main Suman ke ghar ke bahar aaya to darwaza band tha. Mene khatkhatya.
thodi der baad Suman ne darwaza khola, or mujhe dekha......haan kya h, moti lal kidhar h. Mene ek haath se apna kurta uper kiya or dusre haath se apne suthan (pajame)ke uper se hi apne land ko maslane laga, jo phale se hi phunkaar maar raha tha.
Suman ne mere land ko kuch der dekha phir apni jeeb hontho per pherate huye apni jeebh ko daanto main dabaker ...is naag se mujhe daryane ki kosish mat kar, mere haath main aa gaya na to isko nichod dungi.
Main chup rahte huye apna land bahar nikal liya. Or apne haath se aage picche karne laga.
Ye nazara dur se hi Savita dekh rahi thi or sochne lagi..ye Suman raand kab se Chud rahi h mere yaar se. Aaj to meri bari hi nahi aaygi. Or iska mard bhi Ghar per hoga.
Suman mastani ada mein....ab kya yahi hila hila ke pani nikaalega. Chal andar. Yah kahkar vh kamre ke andar ho gai, main kamre ke ander gaya to wo mujhse lipatker mere honthon Ko chusne lagi. Usne darwaza bhi band nahi kiya, ab itni raat ko bhla kon aata, honth chusaai ka aisa swaad mujhe phali baar aa raha tha, mene bhi apne hontho se uske hontho ko achi tarah chusne laga, Savita bhi Suman ke ghar ke bahar aa chuki thi.
Bahar ek purani si khidki bhi thi, jisme kai saarye draar the wo usme se dekhne lagi.
Suman hontho ko chusne ke baad boli....kahan mar gaya tha kutte, dekh meri choot kitna roi tere land ki yaad main.
Main....Mera luda bhi roya h teri kutiya ke liye.
Suman ne apna blouse or peticote khud utaar diya or neeche gaddhe per lat tye huye....aa jaldi apna kutta daal de meri kutiya main.
Mene bhi jaldi se apne kapde uttar ke nanga hua or gaddhe per aaker uske uper letker apne lode ko uski choot ke suraakh per rakh diya. Uski choot ke ander paani ka itna ubaal aa chuka tha, jo uski choot ke bahar tak mujhe mahsoos hua, mene apna land bina deri ke uski choot main utaar diya.
Suman...... aaahhhhhh harami ek bar to dard deta hi h tu, dheere nani kar sakta. Uuuuuuu aahhhhh oooo hhhhh uuu karne lagi, main bina ruke dhake lagata raha.
Suman .......mere kutte hhhhhhooooo ahhhhhhh main Marne wali huu, abhi usne ye kaha hi tha ki darwaza khat khtane ki awaaz aayi to main ruk gaya.
Suman ko shayd awaaz sunai nahi di...kar na harami aise waqt main teri maa chud gai, jab meri chudni chahiye thi.
Savita ekdum ander aaye....maa to teri ab main chudwaungi chhinaal.
Suman, Savita ko dekhker...ttttuuuu aandderr kkessee.
Savita....meri taraf dekhte hue, tum dono ko nanga is gaon main nahi ghumvaya to dekhna.
Main Suman ke uper se utarker khada ho gaya or apne lode ko pakadker....phale ise apni choot main ghumaker dekh, teri choot bar bar thuje gumaane ke liye roya karayegi.
Suman bhi thoda thik (normal) ho gai....haa Savita tu bhi karwa le.
Savita unchi awaaz main.....main Teri tarah raand nahi hu, jo kisi arye garye se chudwati firu. Usko shyad is baat ka gussa tha ki wo apne ghar se aayi thi mujh se chudne ke liye, per main aa gaya yahan per sumen ko chodne.
Mera ko bhi gussa aa gaya tha ab, bahut Hui sali Ki nautanki.......mene uske dono bajuon ko pakda aur darwaje ki sath wali deewar ke sath usko Laga Diya, deewar ke sath lagate hi ek haath uski salwar ke nade per Le jakar, uska nada ekadam khinch kar khol diya, aur apna haath wahan se hata liya, mera haath hatte hi uski salwar uske peron ke paas aa gai, use mene sambhalne ka bhi mouka nahi diya, uske dono bajuuono ko pakdker uski garden ko apne hontho se chusne laga.
Savita...chod mujhe harami, jaa is raand ko chod.
Main ...naraz kyu hoti h, phale thuje chod lu phir ise bhi chud dunga, kyu Suman, kya khati h tu.
Suman ...haan haan, thik h. Wo ab bhi thoda ghbra rahi thi, usko pata nahi tha ki main Savita ko phale se hi chodta aaya hu.
Savita..mujhe nahi, itne main mene Suman ko kaha.....Suman iski kaamez uper kar.
Suman paas aayi or uski kameez ko dono taraf se pakdker uske stano tak uper kar diya. Is beech Savita Suman se boli.. dur rahy raand.
Itna hi kah payi thi ki mene apne haath se land pakda aur uski choot ke ched per rakh kar ek zor dar dhakaa marker apna aadha land uski choot main utaar diya.
Savita ke munh se,,......AAAAASHHHHH OOOOOOHHHHHHH, Haaaarrrraammmmiii kkkyyya. Kkkiyyya. Ddddarrrrd. Hhhuuuuas. Main Bina rukye us pelta raha, aur Suman ko kaha iske kaamez utar de iski bra ke saath hi..kitni baar chud chuki h ye mujhse, aaj tere aage nakhre dikha rahi h.
Suman ye sunker hairan Hui... Kya tum Sach kah rahe ho.
Savita.....nahi ye saala jhut bol raha h.
Main...phir yahan Kya Lene aayi thi, Suman ye mere kamre per aayi hogi mujhse chudne, aur jab isne dekha ki Main idhar aa raha hu to, ye mere picche chali aayi hogi.
Suman ko bhi vishwas ho gaya, ki yeh itni raat idher kyu aayi hogi, usne jhat se Savita ke uper ke sab kapde uttar diye, Savita ke nange hote hi mene apne dono haatho se uski dono chuchiyon ko pakda aur Jor jor se dabate hue apna land uski choot main pelne laga.ab mera pura land uski choot ki gehraiyon main jaa raha tha aur Savita........ooooohhhh. Mmaaarrrrr dddddaaaasshhhhhhhhhhllllllaas. Or saath main masti bhari siskiyaan nikalne lagi.
ab Suman bhi josh main aa gai....raand khain ki, mujhe dara rahi thi, Mujhe pata h mitthan ka jo ek baar le le, to uski choot use chain nahi lene deti, wo phir mangti h aise land ko, aur naa mile to hum dono ki tarah pagal ho jaye.
Main ab Jor jor se Savita ki ek chuchi ko zor zor se chusne laga, Suman aage aaye or Savita ki dusri chuchi ko zor se pakdker masal diya. Savita chilayi haram ki jani, teri chori ki h jo..aahhh ooh. Ccciiiiisssiiii hhhayyeee baabbuuu mmaaainn aaaayyyiiii. Mmmerrrrr ppppaaannni. Gggaayys, Savita nidhaal hoker apne sar ko mere kandhon per dal diya.
Suman....is chinaal ko to ras tapak gaya, ab to tum ne isko kisi kaam ke layak nahi choda. Or use chidhate hue uske hi vakya ko dohraya....kaaayyaaa bbaasbbbbbuuu kaaarrtti thi raand.
Main apna land Savita ki choot se nikalte hue Suman ki taraf muda...... ab tera kya iraada h.
Suman...main to teri gulam hu, jo kah wo naa karu to khana, iski tarah nakhre nahi chodti. Savita deewar ke saath Khade khade adkhuhi aanokho se hume dekh rahi thi.
Main .....Aaj main chata hu tu mere lund ko jee bhar ke chuse. (Mene Savita ki taraf ek ungali karte huye kaha) ki main es raand ke paas naa jaker tere paas hi aayu.
Suman ne ek baar Savita ki taraf dekha, phir mere land ke agale sire se apne haato ki mutthi banaker usme mere land ke agle sire Ko tham liya, uski mutthi ke ant tak mere land ka ek tihai bhag hi samaya tha, us. Mutthi ke antim bhaag per Suman ne apne munh se thuk ka ek bada gola sa banaker mere land per gira diya aur phir apni mutthi ko mere land per dabaate hue neeche ki taraf le gai, jisse mere land per uski phenki gayi thook puri mere land per faiyl gayi, aisa usne teen-chaar baar kiya, phir apni mutthi ko mere land ke neeche le jaaker rok diya, or mere land ko pakde rahi, phir apne munh ko mere land per jhuka ker apni jeebh nikalker chaatne lagi, aur Savita ki taraf dekhne lagi, phir apni mutthi ko kohlker apne anghuthe or beechwali ungali ko mere land ke antim bhaag wale sire per rakhker mere lal taamter wale upri bhaag ko aadha(supada) apne honto ko pura kholker mere land per rakh ker apne munh main le gayi or phir use bade pyaar se choosne lagi, jese koi tilewali doodh ki kulfi ho, aur sath sath main Savita ko dekhti, ....dekh kutiya, tere se ye land main chhin ke rahungi.
Savita ab normal ho chuki thi, main apne pero per khada tha or apne sar ko piche ki taraf karke , Aankhen band kiye hue Suman ki lund-chuswai ka maja le raha tha, Savita aayi or mere pero ke paas Suman ke saath Beth gayi, usne apna ek haath aage kiya or mere tatyo ko pakdker halka sa dabaya to mane apna sar sidha karke Aankhen kholker dekha.
Savita...dekh, haranman, main bhi dekhati hu mere Babu ka loda kese tu mujh se chhin pati h, yeh kahker usne apna pura munh khola or mere ek bhut hi mote se aand ko pure munh main le liya, aur chapd chapd ki awaaz karte hue chusne lagi, mere to mano sharir se mera koi khoon hi nikaal raha ho, aisa ek bar mujhe mahsus hua, kya dono mathechod mera land ek saath choos rahi thi.
Mera land ka haal to aisa ho gaya, jese "kato to khoon nahi" aaj bade narm swbhaav main, bahi main kya khta hu, inka mukabla karwate Hain. Jo jeeta wo meri, jo haara wo teri.
Suman mere land ke supada ko muhnu or hontho se zor se daba ke, munh khol deti phir hontho ko daba ke mere land ko kas leti, Savita bhi mere tatto ko nichla honth thodo teda thata uper wala honth se munh main se kaskar chosti phir thode se honth khol deti, 15 minute tak dono mujhe khush karne ke liye pura Jor dikhaya.
Mene Suman ke dono baju pakde our gadde per le jaaker use ghodi bana diya, isi beech mera taata jo Savita ke munh main tha uske munh se nikal gaya, uska chehra aesa ho gaya, jese kisi maa ne apne bacche ko doodh pilate samya apna than uske munh se nikal liya ho.
Mene apne land per thookh giraker land ko Suman ki choot main lagaker uski choot main pel diya. Suman aahhh mere saiyaan kya maza h oooooohhh aahhh karne lagi. Main Savita ko ...kya raand idher aa, wo bhi mere paas aayi, meri tarah apne ghutno ko modker mere saath beth gai, mene apna ek haath uske sar ke picche baalo ke uper rakhte hue apni taraf khinca or uske hontoho ko chusne laga, uske badan main phir se khumari chhane lagi, mene apni jeebh isbaar uske munh main de di, phale to usne munh ko kholker hi rakha, phir meri jeeb ko chusne lagi. Main Suman ki choot ko chudate huye, Savita ke hontho ko chusta, chumta, phir thoda jor se kaat leta, Suman ko chudate huye uski gaand per jor se apne ek haath se tamacha maar deta, jhan Suman ohhhh karti wahi Savita masti se aaha bharti, kuch der aise hi karne ke baad mene apna land Suman ki choot se nikal liya or Savita ko baju ko khinch ker use bhi Suman ke paas ghodi banne ka ishara kiya, wo kisi naa nukur ke Suman ke baaju main ghodi ban gai, mene apna land Savita ki choot main daal diya or Jor jor se use chudne laga or sath sath hi suman ki gaand ko apne haath se maslane laga.
Main...kya mast ho tum dona, tum dono chinta naa karo aaj tum dono ki pyaas bhuja duga, ye khate huye mene ek ungli apne muhn main le jaaker use apni thook se gila kiya, aur Suman ki gaand ke upri ched ko kurydne laga.
Suman zor se boli .......haye kya karta h harami meri gaand per kisi ne haath nahi lagaya, per thujhe main nahi rok sakti, tu mera sartaaz h.
Mene halki si ungli uski gaand main de di wo chillyi udher Savita bhi apni gaand bhut teji se aage picche karne lagi jisse uski gaand meri jaangh se takraati or Jor jor se thappad thappad ki awaaz hone lagti. Mene aadhi ungli uski gaand main de di. Use dard hua, per boli kuch naa, bas hhhhyyyee kar rahi thi. Main dusre haath se kabhi Savita ki gaand per zor se Marta to khabi Suman ki gaand per. Wo dono aaahhh kar ke rah jaati.
Savita jor jor se apni gaand ko aage picche karte huye jhad gai or gadde per anodhe muhn hi pad gai. Jisse mera land uski choot se bahar aa gaya. Mene apna land Suman ki choot ke suraakh per lagaya or apni ungali uski gaand se nikalker, apna land ander ko dhakel diya, uski choot itni Gili thi ki bina kisi rukwaat ke uski choot ki gehraiyon mein Chala Gaya.
Suman..... aaahhhhhh ohhhhhhhhh karti huye haye harami kya land h tera, tere liye khai bhi chud jayoon, main apne harami pati ke saamne bhi thujh se chud jayoon.
Satth main soye Savita ne uski latkti chochiyo ko pakda or masl diya. Suman ...raand masalker chhod kiyu diya, dabati rah bhut maza aa raha h. Mene thabi Suman ki ek chuchi ko pakda aur maslane laga aur Savita ko kaha tu iski dusri ko Chus ise itna mazja aayega ki ye hum dono ki hi raand ban jaygi, wo aisa hi karne lagi. Main Suman ki choot main aadhe se jyada land niklata or zor se ander ko pel deta, ab Savita uski chuchiyana Chus rahi thi or main ek haath se uski ek chuchi ko masal raha tha aur dusre haath se uski gaand per marte hue use choud Raha tha, es kirya se wo saatve aasman ki sair karte hue chudyi ka mazaa le rahi thi........tuuuum ahhhhhh donoooooohhhhh haraassmi ioiii merrrasss ssaaarrra. arrraaassss niiii. Kkkaaallll lllogge.
Bhut der tak ye chalta raha phir Suman bhi apni chhot kaa bhut sa pani chodti hui jhad gayi. Mene apna land bahar nikala or haath se muth maarte huye uski gaand per apna saara virya nikal diya. Phir gaade per Savita or suman ke beech late gaya. Saari raat un dona ki chudi ki, phir subh 4 baje Savita apne ghar thata main apne kamre per aaya gaya. M
ene dekha Motilal abhi bhi zameen per pada hua so raha h. Main apni khaat per aa ker pad gaya........


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