Adultery Noida wife's descent into Quicksand ( New Novel)

[KingRocks]

Even though writing is good pace is going too fast... As i mentioned earlier don't change the scenes too quickly transition needs to be slow from one setting to another.


You changed the village setting to another deal to be made on boats. Gave time frame of two months. Although writing of the scenes give good speed to the story but character building and story building happens in the transitions. And readers enjoy more with more timing with one setting.
I hope you will see to this.

Thank you for the quick update