12-08-2026, 04:20 PM
Main ye story starting se pad raha hun. Iske aage ka bhi ek part hai jo shayad delete ho gya hai. Ye story desichut bhai ne bahut accha likh raha tha lekin pata nahi unko kya ho gya aur dur se ek bhai ko de diye likh ne ke liye dono acche se likh rahe the lekin baad mein koi aur update dene lage to main padna chod diya. Lekin jab se aap likh rahe ho, aap ka writting mein kuch alag hi baat hai. Jaise se lag raha hai story jaise suru hua tha waise hi chal raha hai. I actually love your writing, please aise hi likhte rahiye. Aap ko cheer up karne ke liye hum log hai. Wish you all the best and waiting for the next update.


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