Adultery Ajab Si Piyas

[maitripatel]

Friends, I honestly don’t know how successfully I have been able to portray Sana’s inner turmoil, the conflict between her loyalty to her husband, her emotional confusion, and the choices that have pulled her into a troubling situation. The other way she is liking Neeru's dirty activities, his dirty cock and smell which he has in his body. She repeatedly thinks that the same dirty thing with Neeru would be the last time, beu the 'last' never come. She become the hore of Neeru and his actions which allures her to go under him again and again. His all abusive activities attract her.


 
Being a woman, I have tried to explore not merely the circumstances around her and in her soul, but the emotional struggle taking place within her- a struggle of conscience, vulnerability, confusion, and conflicting desires.

 
I hope, for a little while, this piece of writing was able to take you beyond the surface of the story and make you look at Sana’s situation from a different perspective.
 

I would genuinely love to hear your thoughts, suggestions, and honest feedback. Your responses always help me understand whether I have been able to convey the emotions of my characters in the way I intended.



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JAY BHARAT from Maitri Patel.