12-08-2026, 12:35 PM
(11-08-2026, 10:06 PM)KingRocks Wrote: I hope writer don't just jump scenes to scenes throw some hot moments between transition from one scene to other
Completely agree Sir
This is a deep odessey..not a slam bang type of story ..
I appreciate your taste for transition screen play ..
Few readers love this under burn and I can't say how happy I am to read comments which talk of under current..
Keep supporting..
And do read my next update in the evening


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