09-08-2026, 02:05 PM
(09-08-2026, 09:18 AM)Lousy1995 Wrote: Guys, could you please share your feedback on the chapter? I’d really love to hear your thoughts.
If you have any recommendations, suggestions, or ideas for the upcoming chapters, feel free to share them as well. I’ll definitely try to incorporate them into the future updates where they fit naturally.
I feel like I may be missing some important elements when writing the sex scenes. Can you share your thoughts on how I can present these scenes more effectively, especially in terms of emotional reactions, character chemistry, atmosphere, pacing, dialogue, and natural progression?
Thanks for reading and supporting the story! ❤️
(09-08-2026, 10:01 AM)Raj_Rohan Wrote: Everything goes well also add hugging smooching forehead kiss and before licking pussy start from kissing feet.
It will be nice if u add gifs/pics etc.,
Waiting for next 2 days today.
Please upload soon
I have created some AI images - marking some of the scenes from the story but unable to upload it due to some error/limitation on my account.
Just found out that a minimum of 30 replies should be made before i can upload it so...


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