07-08-2026, 02:19 PM
I just finished reading the last two chapters. Your writing is incredibly beautiful and polished. The way you portrayed Arjun masturbating with his mother's underwear, and then becoming frightened when he realized what he had done, was written very well. You conveyed every emotion and detail beautifully.
I think the fact that Laxmi and Ravi spend a night together without giving in to lust shows that their relationship is gradually moving beyond physical desire and toward genuine love. At the same time, it also makes me wonder how things will unfold once Meena arrives.
Every chapter ends in a way that leaves me eagerly waiting for the next one. Wonderful work, author!
I think the fact that Laxmi and Ravi spend a night together without giving in to lust shows that their relationship is gradually moving beyond physical desire and toward genuine love. At the same time, it also makes me wonder how things will unfold once Meena arrives.
Every chapter ends in a way that leaves me eagerly waiting for the next one. Wonderful work, author!


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