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[dom nic torrento]

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Hi Dom Garu,


You write really good. Your imagination, creativity, and the freshness in your storytelling are excellent. The only thing I feel could be improved is that some parts become a little too elaborate.

A few updates ago, there was a nice progression where Vinay finally broke the ice and vaguely expressed his feelings to Swapna. I thought that moment would create some magic and become a turning point in the story. I expected Swapna to slowly start thinking about Vinay during her quiet and lonely moments, allowing those feelings to develop naturally over time.

I feel that kind of emotional progression would make their connection even more engaging and impactful. Now last few updates are little boring and seems got disconnected.

When Vinay is so obsessed or loved her, why he is not making any moves when they live in the same home? I see some gaps in there connection.

I am daring to write my perspective and could be missing some plots of your story plans. Will keep waiting for your stories and always like your stories. All the best

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