Adultery என்னால் தாம் எல்லாம் என்னை மன்னிச்சிடு அம்மா

[Rishabh1]

Dear author, tamil is not my first language yet I've read the vast majority of the story except last 30 pages using translation I know it only captured 80% of the essence yet still wonderful narration!, I've paused/stopped because it was too much suffering to take in. Initial episodes with kumar were outright brutal and most hurtful part was Rajesh episode, it was so hurtful to the extent that even rajesh himself was stunned why sangeeta was tormenting sanjay like that. In this entire story biggest loser is Ajay he was working in dubai like a dog for the family and when rajesh was joking about how he was offering breadcrumbs of salary and promotion to keep him busy so that he can ravage his wife! Sangeeta was nonchalant and casually laughs with him, Did she ever have any love for Ajay or Sanjay??

The excitement and driving force of the story is Sanjay's longing and devotion to his mother, I did not care who is screwing who or how often, as a writer you had the absolute authority to take the story in whichever direction you want, but it would've been nice if the plot had been faithful to the characters.

All sex episodes of sangeeta with her lovers, you explained them in vivid detail and the acts of love after the sex like tying taali, calling them maava, feeding each other lovingly etc these acts amplified sanjay's suffering cause his sex episodes (albeit, only a few) with sangi were always short with out much detail, even with out sex I was waiting and waiting for her to actually give him some true motherly love! All she does is telling him to focus on his and career and she fucks around!

Ironically the only occasions she offered him her pussy was out of gratitude for his unconditional love whether it's in ooty or when he rescued her with all that milk producing shenanigans!! I'm not saying sanjay is a saint and he is also flawed and he definitely fucked around, but the way you presented him, he was a decent chap and his love for his mother is unwavering. Another thing I never understood is he's got bigger dick than all her lovers and she was clearly on next level of ecstasy when she was with him but yet again she discards him like a used condom why!?

I dont know what to say brother, Mother son stories are truly special because this dynamic simply doesn't exist in other relationships, she can be your provider, healer, mentor and everything. I really wish he gets true motherly love from sangeeta or he makes peace with it as a fact of life and moves on!!

Thank you for all your hard work!!