Adultery Noida wife's descent into Quicksand ( New Novel)
(02-08-2026, 10:20 AM)SilverArrow Wrote: Thanks because you loved Tauji introduction 
Lot of readers did not quite enjoy it
You tell did you like it

I liked it definitely.After all for his age, the Tauji could only do so much, and Monica is a modern confident  woman so he rightly could not have tried anything by force with her. So, the very naive and obvious excuses given were also very similar to what a Village tharki Buddha might use.
That said, Ramukakalegends' feedback is acceptable too as that only adds to making the story more well rounded and the moment also becomes more enticing.The way of writing any sensual moment is in setting the premise and building up the anticipation.Half the time,the anticipation itself is so so damn exicitng and you  might have read few other stories here with that high standard.
But Kudos to you on this story, as its on its way to becoming a xossipy classic.Keep Going !!!
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RE: Monica into Quicksand - by SilverArrow - 10-04-2026, 09:41 AM
RE: Monica into Quicksand - by The_Ramukaka - 10-04-2026, 10:35 AM
RE: Monica into Quicksand - by SilverArrow - 10-04-2026, 07:21 PM
RE: Monica into Quicksand - by desihunter - 10-04-2026, 11:42 AM
RE: Monica into Quicksand - by SilverArrow - 10-04-2026, 07:22 PM
RE: Monica into Quicksand - by Glenlivet - 10-04-2026, 04:20 PM
RE: Monica into Quicksand - by SilverArrow - 10-04-2026, 07:26 PM
RE: Noida wife's descent into Quicksand ( New Novel) - by qazmlp - 02-08-2026, 07:13 PM



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