02-08-2026, 06:04 PM
Great start! Really looking forward for the upcoming parts.
Looks like you have taken inspiration from the classic Manya story. I have a suggestion: please consider adding more erotic conversations among the characters (which you are already doing).
You can also include tickling scenes where Bunty tickles the scantily-clad mom's armpits and waist while Dhruv stretches and holds her hands above her head and just watches her body struggle helplessly as she laughs and chides them.
Looks like you have taken inspiration from the classic Manya story. I have a suggestion: please consider adding more erotic conversations among the characters (which you are already doing).
You can also include tickling scenes where Bunty tickles the scantily-clad mom's armpits and waist while Dhruv stretches and holds her hands above her head and just watches her body struggle helplessly as she laughs and chides them.


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