02-08-2026, 11:43 AM
Super hot bedroom night ending!
Well crafted! Rakeshs turmoil covered well but shud have had him record Monica's moans and then confront the lies.
The morning boobsuck was icing on the cake.... so erotic and Monica's continued betrayal state was amazing. Maybe a dialog herr and there by either of the two to "re-confirm" they are husband and wife...... wudve been even more erotic.....
The Tauji run-in was interesting but It came in abit absurd, rather maybe he shudve been depicted earlier day to be shown trying to talk more to bahu or he cudve given a visit during the stargazing moments, to give readers more context of his motivation. Currently it came in more of a vibe of derailment ti the main plot.
Brilliant work, superbly depicted, awaiting next update
Well crafted! Rakeshs turmoil covered well but shud have had him record Monica's moans and then confront the lies.
The morning boobsuck was icing on the cake.... so erotic and Monica's continued betrayal state was amazing. Maybe a dialog herr and there by either of the two to "re-confirm" they are husband and wife...... wudve been even more erotic.....
The Tauji run-in was interesting but It came in abit absurd, rather maybe he shudve been depicted earlier day to be shown trying to talk more to bahu or he cudve given a visit during the stargazing moments, to give readers more context of his motivation. Currently it came in more of a vibe of derailment ti the main plot.
Brilliant work, superbly depicted, awaiting next update
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