Adultery Shaadishuda Jhanvi aur Mature Uncles ki Garmi aur Deewangi

[DevinaB33F]

It's not about better, You are too focused on dialogues and just a scene rather than building a plot around the story!
Unki kahani alag alag raahon se guzar rahi hai with storyline, Aapki kahani me har character sex tak hi simit hai unka khud ka perspective hi nahi hai,
Isliye log padh kar jaldi bhool jaate hai !

accha baba .. critic banna bahut asan hain .. anyways tc