28-07-2026, 10:27 PM
Reading your chapter was like reading a beautiful poem. You have expressed both Lakshmi's and Arjun's emotions with remarkable depth and authenticity. One particular line ( The last piece of my innocence died in that moment-watching my mother..........) moved me deeply and left me heartbroken. The way you're narrating the story is simply beautiful. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next update.


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